I consider the fourth rough to be the best. It makes sense to put the heading "The War Between the Libyas" in the center (hence, emphasis on the word "between"). I think it needs working on kerning and tracking (though the spacing between the lines are GREAT). You did a great job on conveying the message. Also, I think the paragraph at the bottom should be reaching the bottom edge of the box. The first, second and fifth roughs have potential, too. :D
I consider the fourth rough to be the best. It makes sense to put the heading "The War Between the Libyas" in the center (hence, emphasis on the word "between"). I think it needs working on kerning and tracking (though the spacing between the lines are GREAT). You did a great job on conveying the message. Also, I think the paragraph at the bottom should be reaching the bottom edge of the box. The first, second and fifth roughs have potential, too. :D
ReplyDeleteThe last one is very nice, simple and minimalistic. maybe play around with the weight of the words to give more depth?
ReplyDeletei love the simplicity of them works really well.
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